The version of RUR we are reading in class is the one that made the play known and has been standard for many decades. However, that translation by Paul Selver and collaborators has been superceded, some would argue, by a more recent one by Claudia Novack-Jones (1989). As Robert Philmus notes, Paul
Selver has frequently been attacked since the late 1980s for his treachery as a
translator of R.U.R. But Philmus argues that "neither of the two different editions of R.U.R.
bearing Selver's name, even when combined, represents his original work," and that the translation was "translation by committee." (see "Matters of Translation: Karel Capek and Paul Selver," Science Fiction Studies 28.1 (March 2001): 7-32).For a taste of the charges against Selver, please have a look at comments by Merritt Abrash in his "R.U.R. Restored and Reconsidered," Extrapolation 32.2 (Summer 1991): 184-192):
Considering that Karel Capek's R.U.R. (Rossums Universal Robots)
is generally regarded as a science fiction classic, and that it popularized
one of the most distinctive science fiction words,' it is treated rather
slightingly by science fiction historians. They cannot very well omit the
play, but, in major survey by Nicholls, Gunn, Barron, Aldiss, and Suvin,
it receives only passing mention or a few descriptive sentences. Similarly,
all teachers of science fiction presumably mention R.U.R., but rare
indeed are those who assign it to be read. It has become a kind of
historical artifact, treated with unfailing respect but not as a work of
contemporary viability.
Lack of availability does not seem to be a factor, since the play has
been in at least one anthology during every decade (although this is a
considerable dropoff from the 1930s, when, according to Scholes and
Rabkin, R.U.R. was a "standard high school text" 129]). More to the
point is the possibility that for several decades readers have dismissed
it as merely an early example of the now hackneyed theme that "robots
take over and wipe out humanity" (a description by Aldiss [184]),
undeserving of serious attention. The exact mix of literary, sociological,
and technological reasons behind R.U.R.'s marginalization is a matter
of conjecture; but the long decline—even among students of science
fiction—from the worldwide excitement which greeted it in the 1920s is
a striking fact.
In 1990, however, there is a unique opportunity for reappraisal: the
first new English translation of the play in nearly seventy years, by
Claudia Novack-Jones, has been published in Toward the Radical Center,
a collection of Capek works almost all in fresh translations. This new
version of R. U.R. includes many pages missing from the standard English
one by Paul Selver (1923) and is superior to it in concept, coherence,
and literary quality. The R.U.R. familiar to generations of English language
readers stands revealed as severely distorted by extensive bowdlerization,
scores of textual omissions, and the blunting of statements
which fall outside the usual cliches about robots making life easier for
humanity, or, alternatively, dehumanizing it.' The remainder of this article
will, in the course of presenting the significant ways in which the
translations differ, consider whether the play's increasingly nominal status
in the science fiction canon its ascribable to the inadequacies of Selver's
version or has more deep-seated causes. (The Selver translation, as printed
in Lewis (3-58), is identified below by "PS," and the Novack-Jones by
"NJ." Page numbers for PS refer to the Arthur O. Lewis, Jr. anthology.
Of Men and Machines [New York: Dutton, 1963].)
The bowdlerization of Capek's original text is astonishing; not only
is anything dealing with sexuality omitted (even the words "infertile"
and "sterile"), but strong oaths and violent images are toned down, and
words and phrases with possible unpleasant connotations are replaced.
A sampling:
NJ PS
worm beetle
abortions monstrosities
organism mechanism
Jesus Christ good gracious
Jesusmaryandjoseph my goodness
charbroiled charred to cinders [referring to burned robots]
bloody chunks of meat shapeless clods
I'd kill to know I'd give a good deal to know
While none of this seriously alters what Capek intended to .say (although
"sterile flowers," omitted in several places in PS, is an important
metaphor bearing on Helena's inability to have children—itself a theme
skirted in PS, it contributes mightily to a flatness in the dialogue, an
absence of vivid and memorable language for which Capek was taken
to task by no less a literary critic than Kenneth Burke (49-50).
Even more of an eye-opener is the elimination of a powerful episode
of stage violence. Damon, a robot omitted in PS, but "The Ruler of
the Robots" in NJ, insists on undergoing unskilled surgical experimentation
performed by Alquist—the last human—in the desperate hope
that a way to make new robots can be found. From offstage, we hear
Alquist reluctantly proceeding with the dissection while Damon screams,
six times, "Cut!" or "Aaaa!" Alquist then runs on stage, flings off his
bloody lab coat, and looks in horror at his hands:
ALQUIST: Bloody claws, if only you had fallen from my wrists! Pss, away!
Out of my sight, hands! You have killed—
(Damon staggers in from the right, swathed in a blood-stained sheet.)
ALQUIST (shrinking back): What are you doing here? What do you want?
DAMON: I am al-alive! It—it—it is better to live! (102-03)
Alquist orders other robots to take Damon away, then turns to washing
his hands with a futile vigor equaled only by Lady Macbeth (expressing
sentiments similar to hers, too). The entire jolting scene is rendered in
PS as follows:
RADIUS [Damon is omitted in PS]: Ready. Begin—
ALQUIST: Yes, begin or end. God, give me strength. (Goes into dissecting
room. He comes out terrified.) No, no, 1 will not. I cannot. (He collapses
on couch.) O Lord, let not mankind perish from the Earth. (He falls asleep.)
(55)
The absence of exclamation marks is not the least of the peculiarities
in this translation.
The material cut from NJ, ranging from the two-page Damon scene
down to single words, totals no less than seventeen of seventy-four
pages—almost twenty-five percent. Over half of NJ's Act III is excised
from PS, which may account for the latter being divided into Acts I,
II, III, Epilogue, whereas in NJ the division runs Prologue, Acts I, II,
III. The most astonishing single change is the complete omission from
PS of the entire thirty-two line speech by Alquist (to be described below)
which ends the play.